zimon66: (Yan Valentine #2 ("Hellsing"))
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EDIT: Yes, I know the edit is suppose to go at the end of a post but this is too important for that. I posted on this over in [livejournal.com profile] hellsingreviews and if people hold-off on leaving negative reviews the writer may do a second chapter and this will probably result in her story getting nailed on "Fics from Hell" - read it all on here in my HellsingReviews post "Alucard accused of being a Sue???!!!


"Hellsing2 supposed to be squared" - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2185997/1/ -the only changes she made was this long-drawn out defense, she thinks we were all flaming her last time, here's an example of her defense -

Number 1- Hinata is NOT a mery-sue, hell she’s not even close. Hinata was a character I made up long before I watched Hellsing and decided to use her because she fit best. Our personalities, appearances and attitudes are completely different! Just a note, even if she WAS a mery-sue, which she is not, does it really make that much of a difference? I mean, Alucard is a mery-sue and everyone adores him . I have never written a mery-sue, except for my character in the Vacation story of yugioh I had here before. That was my only mery-sue!

And here's reponse to the "flames" -

Anyway, that’s it for now…No more FLAMES! I don’t care who you are, unless they are POLITE flames, I will not except them! I’m stating this now. I’ve had it. Those flames, which weren’t even good ones really put me in a bad mood. This is my very first attempt at a Hellsing fic with my ORIGINAL character! So, please, bare with me, it may not be as good as someone else’s story. I’m sorry! I’m only human and this is my first attempt at this kind of story. If you have some questions, then by all means, review and ask them just make sure there in a polite and orderly fashion! Thanks everyone, if I continue to have problems, I will be removing this story for good and only posting it on my website. has gotten to the point where no one wants to be on it anymore because of rude people like that. Thanks!

I’m a stubborn girl so I didn’t let those four flames get me down about this fic, I like it, my friend who likes Luke liked it and that’s mainly who I wrote it for. Her and Myself! Any comments from Kupo (Sarah) are welcome! (Flames or not)

As for the people who have nothing better to do then flame people, GET A LIFE!



Gee, so if she get's negative reviews, excuse me, flames she'll take down her story? I'm all for it and did leave a review saying "Loose the MarySue if you truly care about the Hellsing characters"

Date: Dec. 27th, 2004 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wtfsad.livejournal.com
ROFLMAO Alucard is a Mary Sue??? ROFLMAO!!!!

Date: Dec. 27th, 2004 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danceswithelvis.livejournal.com
x.x
RAB needs to review the Valentine bros Mary Sue. Yep.

*prints out story to burn it*

Date: Dec. 27th, 2004 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danceswithelvis.livejournal.com
left my own review of it, this time. Ugh. I think the formatting hurt more than the story.

Date: Dec. 27th, 2004 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wtfsad.livejournal.com
ROFLMAO!!! It all makes sense now!

Date: Dec. 27th, 2004 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wtfsad.livejournal.com
"Dear Sir/Madam,

I, being a fan of sound mind and body, regret to inform you that your work of fan-writing is of dismally low caliber. May I suggest the very reasonable option of never writing again?

Sincerely Yours,
(HELLSING FAN)"

ROFL I suppose someone who claims that her "mery-sue" is NOT a "mery-sue" will be just as delusional about everything else... We should report her fanfic to ff.net and claim that it has smut in it or something, since they seem to like deleting fanfics without even looking at them if one does that. WTF? NO

Date: Dec. 28th, 2004 03:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wtfsad.livejournal.com
ROFL If she calls Alucard a Mary Sue, then she sure as hell would call nice and educational reviews flames!! LMAO

Date: Dec. 28th, 2004 09:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cpt-kraut.livejournal.com
Alucard meets Luke: OMG I LUV YU!

Luke responded: ORSM I LUV YU 2!!!

Then they sexxored!

Then Luke was eaten.

Then Yan said: Hey, you are very sechsay and cool, Alucard!

Alucard responded: Yes.

Then they sexxored.

Then Yan was eaten.

Then The End.


Sorry, I didn´t read anything except the headlines, so I don´t care. ;P

Date: Dec. 29th, 2004 12:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cpt-kraut.livejournal.com
HARPO MARX!?!?!?!? HARPO FUCKING MARX!?!?!??!??

WHERE´S THE BRAZILIAN DEATH SQUADS WHEN YOU NEED THEM?! >__