Valentine Brothers have been MARYSUED!!!
Dec. 19th, 2004 07:26 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
zimon66"Hellsing2" - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2178088/1/
I'm not happy about this!!!
A disturbing twist of fate, Luke&Yan got a MS before Pip did (OK there was a MS/Pip story in the works but the writer only got as far as the MS meeting up with "Uncle Walter" and that was several months ago. Lucky Pip she stopped writing - said MS by the way was refered to in the summary as a "OC (Original Character)". Yeah right 17 year old girl with purple hair, a weird French name, and recently lost her parents but thank goodness for "Uncle Walter" who was moving her into the Hellsing Mansion that is so OC *snort*
EDIT: In my rage forgot to mention both Alucard and Integra also suffer. Integra is killed-off in the first paragragh by Alucard and she ordered him to do it???!!! Why, to make way for the MarySue in the story who is going to be protected by Alucard as ordered by a dying Integra.
Gee isn't that swell, as if the MS and OCCness wasn't bad enough lets throw in a oh so dramatic death scene that ends with Integra's blood running red from a slit throat and her last words being about the MS *gags*
If there is a second chapter (and I hope not) I'm going to try and get this reviewed on Fics from Hell - The Hellsing Ficbitching Station because this is that BAD!!!
EDIT: I left a review expressing my displeasure. Should have copied it before sending to ff.net (reviews don't show until 24 hours later) to post here, but my memory is still fresh on it -
Usually I'm happy to see a Valentine Brothers story but not this one.
How dare you stick them with a MarySue!!! Do you hate them for some reason because using a MS in a fanfic only hurts/insults the existing characters.
How dare you call the MarySue an Original Character. MSs are not OCs, learn the difference!!!
Well, anyway, congradulations, you're the first fanfic writer to MarySue the Valentine Brothers - thanx a lot!!!
I'm not happy about this!!!
A disturbing twist of fate, Luke&Yan got a MS before Pip did (OK there was a MS/Pip story in the works but the writer only got as far as the MS meeting up with "Uncle Walter" and that was several months ago. Lucky Pip she stopped writing - said MS by the way was refered to in the summary as a "OC (Original Character)". Yeah right 17 year old girl with purple hair, a weird French name, and recently lost her parents but thank goodness for "Uncle Walter" who was moving her into the Hellsing Mansion that is so OC *snort*
EDIT: In my rage forgot to mention both Alucard and Integra also suffer. Integra is killed-off in the first paragragh by Alucard and she ordered him to do it???!!! Why, to make way for the MarySue in the story who is going to be protected by Alucard as ordered by a dying Integra.
Gee isn't that swell, as if the MS and OCCness wasn't bad enough lets throw in a oh so dramatic death scene that ends with Integra's blood running red from a slit throat and her last words being about the MS *gags*
If there is a second chapter (and I hope not) I'm going to try and get this reviewed on Fics from Hell - The Hellsing Ficbitching Station because this is that BAD!!!
EDIT: I left a review expressing my displeasure. Should have copied it before sending to ff.net (reviews don't show until 24 hours later) to post here, but my memory is still fresh on it -
Usually I'm happy to see a Valentine Brothers story but not this one.
How dare you stick them with a MarySue!!! Do you hate them for some reason because using a MS in a fanfic only hurts/insults the existing characters.
How dare you call the MarySue an Original Character. MSs are not OCs, learn the difference!!!
Well, anyway, congradulations, you're the first fanfic writer to MarySue the Valentine Brothers - thanx a lot!!!
