Hey what did you think of my story in the book? You can be honest, I am not a crit wank. It was Wong Tony's first Yaoi story so there was worry he could make the characters appealing enough- I was more worried about writing pure smut without much plot, so I am curious about what others think.
Sorry to be late getting back to you - been in 'Jello-head state' due to lack of sleep.
I liked King's Masterpiece the best out of the four (Trach the Tentacle Monster came in second - his ability to talk and engaging personality, how could anybody not like him. Didn't care for the foreskins, I'm not a fan of those).
Anyway, back to KM - it's interesting to read that story after the earlier rape-in-fanfic controversy.
KM is clearly a fantasy - what looks like rape, is in fact consensual sex. In the first few panels, can tell there's some sort of 'game' being played between the two. King puts up no fight at all nor makes any attempt to escape, he wants to be taken by Prince. Matter of fact King's, despite dominated, is pretty much in control most of the time, particularly at the end.
The story setup was good from start to finish. Enjoyed the humor-twist at the end. I don't consider this a PWP.
Artwork also good - looks simular to what I'm use to seeing in actual Japanese yaoi but minus the self-censorship (so that's what cocks, cumming and penetration look like - LOL!!!).
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Date: Aug. 28th, 2005 03:22 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: Aug. 28th, 2005 04:13 pm (UTC)[OT]
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Date: Sep. 4th, 2005 11:55 am (UTC)I liked King's Masterpiece the best out of the four (Trach the Tentacle Monster came in second - his ability to talk and engaging personality, how could anybody not like him. Didn't care for the foreskins, I'm not a fan of those).
Anyway, back to KM - it's interesting to read that story after the earlier rape-in-fanfic controversy.
KM is clearly a fantasy - what looks like rape, is in fact consensual sex. In the first few panels, can tell there's some sort of 'game' being played between the two. King puts up no fight at all nor makes any attempt to escape, he wants to be taken by Prince. Matter of fact King's, despite dominated, is pretty much in control most of the time, particularly at the end.
The story setup was good from start to finish. Enjoyed the humor-twist at the end. I don't consider this a PWP.
Artwork also good - looks simular to what I'm use to seeing in actual Japanese yaoi but minus the self-censorship (so that's what cocks, cumming and penetration look like - LOL!!!).
One question - is High Gloss safe to use as lube?
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Date: Aug. 28th, 2005 05:31 pm (UTC)That's something I'd do :D
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Date: Aug. 28th, 2005 08:20 pm (UTC)